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|  | SOME OF MY STORIES. ;D
« Thread Started on Feb 26, 2008, 8:17pm » | |
Yeah, so these are essentially things I've written over the past year or so. Critiques are accepted, I'd love to see what I can do to improve my work.
Grr. Erm. I couldn't find the one that I had saved and I had finished, it's been on my computer forever but it must have got deleted somehow. -growl- So, I'll just post one then. xP
Enjoy reading!
Just don't steal. Or I'll send my pack of cheese dinosaurs to bite you! xD
As you can see I'm amused easily & I have a wild imagination. 
Oh, and on a random note I love the Macbook Air commerical. Love the song.
BAM!
Here is the lovely:
Chapter 1
Anna looked out the tiny window of the horse drawn carriage, not wanting to be imprisoned at the Richvale School for Girls and Boys. Her parents had wanted her to become more like a lady, more proper. Anna huffed, pressing down the ruffles of her pearl pink dress. She glanced out the window again, sunlight shining through the drawn curtain.
“What are you doing?” her brother asked angrily. Her tough, sensitive but uncaring brother pushed back the curtain, making the carriage dark. “There could be gypsies out there.” He patted her head. John started to tell her something about the weather, the stupid school, something, but Anna wasn’t listening. She picked at the seams of the dress, hoping it would shred into tiny pieces, just like Felicity Hemmingway.
“Are you listening?” John asked knowing full well she wasn’t.
She glared at him, and paused “No. And, don’t touch me.” She then patted his head, the same way he had her’s.
“We’re here.” He called, dismissing her comment. Joy. Pure joy. She thought. She’d be stuck with the nerds, jocks, and rich snobs of the group. She wouldn’t make a friend, not one. For once, Anna planned to keep it that way.
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fearless
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| | Re: SOME OF MY STORIES. ;D
« Reply #1 on Feb 29, 2008, 5:07pm » | |
SOME MORE!! D:
Winter
Icy slopes, joyful faces
It's cold outside,
we all love it in some way.
Celebration,
happy times,
gifts given,
there shouldn't be a crime.
Winter's ending,
the season's changing,
in 8 months we'll meet again.
Because it's winter outside,
This is the time for giving [giving]
So,
It's winter here,
and we're gonna cheer, \because the snow and ice is causing such a fuss,
but that's okay,
Today.
--okay that one's not very good in my opinion. xP
NO TITLE;;
I walk down this lonely dark street
No one's listenign to me,
What did I do wrong?
How could you hon?
I'm sorry for the loss,
for the lies,
Sorry for all this pain you feel inside,
Despite all this I'm gonna cry tonight.
When I sleep,
I dream,
Walking down a quiet corridor,
Breaking down, I can't take this now.
I'm sorry for the loss, the lies,
Sorry for all this pain you feel inside,
Despite all this I'm gonna cry tonight.
Do you hear me now?
As I write a sympathy note,
You don't care no more, don't miss me,
Finally I won't cry.
Not tonight.
--that one has no relevance whatsoever to anything in my life.
all copyright me, Fearless. Ask before you borrow, and always leave credit.
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